When the moon glows full
and the stars speak to you with
infinite sweetness
when you find a green
rolling field, inviting you
to lay upon it
when a lofty view
tugs at that space within you
that never stays full
think of me, perhaps
feel me close, remember my
joy in knowing you.
This started out as haikus composed in my head while I tried to sleep. Although I did follow the traditional 5-7-5 pattern, and there is nature involved, the verses are more like American Sentences (17 syllables), and together form the complete poem.
When emotions run deep, poetry helps me distill the essence of what I want to take away from an experience. Sometimes, it takes a few times to distill it all. I am finding more and more, that fewer words are often best.
Please let me know what you think of this poem. I love comments!