The Audience Awaits

5 Aug

I went outside to watch
the stars tonight, curled
in my Adirondack chair
but those stars, I swear,
peered right back at me
blinking their diamond eyes
in the quivering silence, inquiring
in some universal Morse code,
So, what are you
going to do next?

image

3 Responses to “The Audience Awaits”

  1. Mary's avatar
    Mary August 6, 2015 at 5:49 pm #

    This really made me smile! Fun to think about those stars looking right back at us as we look at them!!

    Like

  2. Jannie Funster's avatar
    Jannie Funster August 10, 2015 at 4:23 pm #

    Really nice to find your blog via DVerse, in a poetry mood today.

    And I am curious… what DID you do next under those stars? 🙂

    Like

  3. Victoria C. Slotto's avatar
    Victoria C. Slotto August 20, 2015 at 5:55 pm #

    Wonderful snippet of life by the water. This was such a great description:
    blinking their diamond eyes
    in the quivering silence

    I bet you answered them, “Nothing.”

    Like

Please let me know what you think of this poem. I love comments!

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.