This is Just to Say

8 Apr

I have written
many poems
about you
on my blog

and which
you were probably
thinking
is not cool

Forgive me
they were fantasy
so sweet
and so irresistible.

Bulletin board in Nantucket

Bulletin board in Nantucket

NaPoWriMo Day 8! I am waay behind again this year, partially because I feel like I lost my muse. Anyway, today’s prompt was to rewrite a famous poem. I chose to rewrite one of my very favorite poems, by William Carlos Williams, which you can read below:

I have eaten
the plums
that were
in the icebox

and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast

Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

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10 Responses to “This is Just to Say”

  1. angieinspired April 8, 2014 at 1:18 pm #

    so sweet and simple. I used his poem for the golden shovel prompt…which was not so simple!

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    • lupitatucker April 8, 2014 at 1:19 pm #

      You are braver than I am, angie. The Golden Shovel seemed to hard for me. This was was easy … glad you liked it!

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      • angieinspired April 8, 2014 at 1:20 pm #

        if stupid is another name for brave, then yes, that’s me!

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      • lupitatucker April 8, 2014 at 1:22 pm #

        no, no, not at all! 🙂

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      • angieinspired April 8, 2014 at 1:23 pm #

        jk, lol, and all that other crap we say to get our point across. Thanks, Lupita.

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  2. El Santo April 8, 2014 at 1:32 pm #

    Reblogged this on Rooktopia and commented:
    I like how this poem uses the easily identifiable last two verses. Also, lovely poem overall. 🙂

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  3. Geo Sans April 9, 2014 at 3:05 am #

    sweet
    fragrance
    of
    forgiveness

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  4. Cressida de Nova April 9, 2014 at 9:00 pm #

    I used the same poem. Enjoyed this a lot.

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