This night is
a fuzzy, fleshy peach
which I aim to take a bite of
just knowing that
it won’t be long
before I am covered
in sticky, sweet juice
dripping from my fingers
running down my arms.
This night is
a sultry dream
a far-away jazz tune
brought by a wayward breeze
an offering laid at my feet
a promise I intend to keep.
This night
is ripe.
This one is my favorite! Amazing imagery, great feel!
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Thanks Peter!
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Oh a night like a peach.. such a nice imagery now when we have October that stickiness is almost to wish for… cool rhythm in this
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nice…the juices of this night running down my chin–a night like a peach…i dig it…smiles.
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The first stanza has a very dripping/running rhythm that itself echoes the topic beautifully. Plus, the poem as a whole makes me much want a peach, no longer in season in Canada…
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Just feels lovely…
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Oh this is a luscious read!
Anna :o]
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Cool, sensuous, evocative and delicious. Great piece.
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There’s some fabulous sensory detail going on here, you’ve made some really good use of it! 🙂
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