Illusion

11 Responses to “Illusion”

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   Victoria C. Slotto March 16, 2016 at 3:28 pm #

   There is a whole story behind this–you’ve encapsulated a relationship in few words. Bravo.

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   Sanaa Rizvi March 16, 2016 at 4:03 pm #

   Such power in the brevity of your lines 🙂

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   Linda Kruschke March 16, 2016 at 4:15 pm #

   In the cold winter we must find our warmth where we can. You said so much with so few words, and an excellent take on the prompt.

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   Grace March 16, 2016 at 6:57 pm #

   What a wonderful contrast of warm and cold ~ Love the short and snappy lines ~

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   whimsygizmo March 16, 2016 at 10:08 pm #

   NICE. Holy cow. This is pithy, and profound.

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   Bodhirose March 16, 2016 at 10:51 pm #

   That flinch from that cold pane said a lot! Excellent!

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   mishunderstood March 17, 2016 at 12:16 am #

   I admire your ability to condense a story! Illusions of love…can be a simple matter of hot vs. cold.

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   Björn Rudberg (brudberg) March 17, 2016 at 1:25 am #

   The cold and warm, the separation.. It’s all there, a strong metaphor

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   Walt Wojtanik March 17, 2016 at 7:28 am #

   So much said in a few words. I like this, Lupita!

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    Mary March 17, 2016 at 10:50 pm #

    Lupita, I can really deeply feel this one.

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    katiemiafrederick March 30, 2016 at 12:39 am #

    Ah.. yes..
    i.. too..
    remember
    panes of
    windows..
    so opaque
    and cOld
    into the
    world of
    wArm
    touch iN
    connecting Love..:)

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